White Stag ★★★☆☆

Title: White Stag
Author: Kara Barbieri
Pub Date: 8 January, 2019
Company: St. Martin’s Press

White Stag, the first book in a brutally stunning series by Kara Barbieri, involves a young girl who finds herself becoming more monster than human and must uncover dangerous truths about who she is and the place that has become her home. 

A Wattpad break out star with over a million reads! Now expanded, revised and available in print and eBook.

As the last child in a family of daughters, seventeen-year-old Janneke was raised to be the male heir. While her sisters were becoming wives and mothers, she was taught to hunt, track, and fight. On the day her village was burned to the ground, Janneke—as the only survivor—was taken captive by the malicious Lydian and eventually sent to work for his nephew Soren.

Janneke’s survival in the court of merciless monsters has come at the cost of her connection to the human world. And when the Goblin King’s death ignites an ancient hunt for the next king, Soren senses an opportunity for her to finally fully accept the ways of the brutal Permafrost. But every action he takes to bring her deeper into his world only shows him that a little humanity isn’t bad—especially when it comes to those you care about.

Through every battle they survive, Janneke’s loyalty to Soren deepens. After dangerous truths are revealed, Janneke must choose between holding on or letting go of her last connections to a world she no longer belongs to. She must make the right choice to save the only thing keeping both worlds from crumbling.

If you love action, which we all know you do, you’ll be pulled into Janneke’s story from page one. In just the first chapter, we learn that Janneke has been through some traumatic events, but she’s strong and she’s made it through. Just in case you need convincing of her mental and physical strength, she sees her torturer and fends him off, never backing down from the fight and willing herself to be in control. Then the White Stag, the symbol of the emperor’s power leaves.

End scene.

You better believe I turned the page to find out what happened next.

But then the action stopped. And I found myself in a world of stilted dialogue and flashbacks and I was bored. I didn’t want to be bored. Look at that cover, look at that summary. Goblins! Goblin kings! Hunts! Action! Perhaps… romance?

When the narrative was in the action, it was wonderful and I couldn’t put it down. But the lulls in between make it difficult to review this title because I kept putting it down and picking it up. And I could see myself easily not finishing it at all.

Ultimately, White Stag wasn’t bad, but it wasn’t great either.


🤞 Don’t miss these tips!

Weekly writing advice in your inbox PLUS get entered to win an All By My Shelf Membership which gets you access to FULL author interviews, craft analyses, and bi-weekly writing exercises.

Published by J. M. Tuckerman

J.M.Tuckerman is a neurodivergent writer with a big education. She holds an MFA in Writing for Children and Young Adults, an MA in Writing, and a BA in Writing Arts (specializing in Creative Writing, New Media Writing, and Publication; concentrating in New Media Production), which she somehow managed to earn despite her three very loud and large dogs. Jessica was lucky enough to intern at Quirk Books and Picador, USA while earning her master’s degrees. Her service dog, Ringo, is very proud of all that she has accomplished and hopes to be on a back cover of a published book with her very soon. An avid reader, writer, and lover of young adult and middle-grade literature, Jessica’s bookshelf is overflowing with hardbacks, paperbacks, and a million half-filled notebooks. She is a proud fur-mommy to two lab/st-bernard littermates, a retriever-mix service dog, and one orange little hobgoblin cat, all of whom have made very audible appearances on the Booked All Night podcast.

Leave a Reply

Become a Supporter or Member for $5 a month and get FULL author interviews, bi-weekly writing exercises, craft analyses, and more.

%d bloggers like this: